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WOW!!!! now there's a twist. Never saw it coming...well actually no one did

~ this is so good Kabu ~

Elyse

posted by
elysianfields
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July 10, 2008
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Still here
posted by
Azur
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July 9, 2008
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Still here
posted by
Azur
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July 9, 2008
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Write on!
This is really dramatic... And the characters are very well drawn, I like that even more than the suspense.
posted by
hagi
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July 9, 2008
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WHAT IS NEXT.....AND? AND? AND? I just can't wait..LOL
posted by
wigopa
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July 8, 2008
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...write on!! moon
posted by
magic_moon
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July 8, 2008
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Kabuiepie-;)
Interesting, I think the cop done it.

Love ya

posted by
WileyJohn
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July 8, 2008
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...oh my oh my......it is getting DANGEROUS....
posted by
NiteTide
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July 8, 2008
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So sad...
posted by
lovelyladymonk
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July 8, 2008
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Kabu
I love it!

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Sira890
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July 8, 2008
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Kabu
Darling don't we all have family in dire straits? This is getting more and more suspect. I don't think it is Mark at this point she gave it up to easily! You are a great writer. Love you,
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Justi
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July 8, 2008
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WoW! What a development!
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Soul_Builder101
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July 8, 2008
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