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Hmmmm....Really powerful feelings here.
posted by
Kobriel
on July 9, 2008 at 8:21 AM
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Redemption revealed warmly and startling! Take care, BCA!
posted by
BC-A
on July 8, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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NICE!!!!
I felt what you were saying!! Also I loved the flow of the poem. Great work!!!
posted by
Hank29
on July 8, 2008 at 4:22 PM
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kingclay
Your poem makes me wonder why so many people chase down times in their lives that have already passed. Why not enjoy what we are today and grow from that? Thanks for stopping by my blog.
posted by
Hilow
on July 8, 2008 at 12:18 PM
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It all comes to pass .. everything .. don't ever doubt that.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 8, 2008 at 11:43 AM
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I live my life like there's no tomorrow
Thanks for the fine read my friend.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 8, 2008 at 11:13 AM
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sad...
posted by
Star5_
on July 8, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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King
Wow! ... but unfortunately she wouldn't be the first woman to have been lead down some misguided path in search of youth. If this is reality (and not just poetic license), I feel for your son.
posted by
Troosha
on July 8, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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