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Rising the bar! You really nail this one thank you!

posted by Mystereo on December 15, 2008 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

I think I missed this one, Nautikos.  Wonderful.  I was 16 once, and at different periods of time I had four 16 year olds.  I just love this haiku.   

posted by TAPS. on August 14, 2008 at 1:22 AM | link to this | reply

posted by KaBooM62 on August 13, 2008 at 6:02 AM | link to this | reply

great!

posted by merkie on August 6, 2008 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

hey Nautikos

hoping to see new treasures from you my friend.  Have a great day

posted by Smittenheimer on July 18, 2008 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

Creating your life

Without having the answers

Is stretching your (he)art......

posted by Krisles on July 15, 2008 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

Have a great day

posted by Smittenheimer on July 10, 2008 at 8:20 AM | link to this | reply

good one!

posted by pelagus on July 10, 2008 at 2:07 AM | link to this | reply

 Oh gosh Naut...this DID - does touch my heart ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 9, 2008 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful, Nautikos.  So glad you matured.  Uncertainty is an unhappy dwelling.

posted by TAPS. on July 9, 2008 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

Hey, that is good, Nautikos.........

posted by MaggieMae on July 9, 2008 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

When I was young my Mother knew nothing

Now she has been dead for long and there is so much information I need from her.

posted by Kabu on July 8, 2008 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Sooo...young and cocky...were ya?....lmao

It's amazing what age does to our perspective on things.
Ideally, it's a humbling experience, and for you, it seems to have been.
Excellent and wise Haiku, Naut.  

posted by metalrat on July 8, 2008 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful Haiku! Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 8, 2008 at 1:33 PM | link to this | reply

So true to life

posted by Kayzzaman on July 8, 2008 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

An absolutely true statement ... I can relate to it as well !

posted by afzal50 on July 8, 2008 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply

In any event ...

 

Enjoy! Take care, BCA!

posted by BC-A on July 8, 2008 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

That's a blick someone had to note down this way .. did good.

posted by Angesom_AG on July 8, 2008 at 4:15 AM | link to this | reply