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Let It Go

Ah Sinonme, you are a tender heart

moving into the storms of life

may  peace be your centre always

As you move ever onward.

Good write, merkie

posted by merkie on July 13, 2008 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

Amen sistah! This is so true .... so, so true. Perfect!

posted by VictoriaP on July 8, 2008 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply

oh dearest sinome...you are so generous at heart and i adore you so much...this speaks to me too my love...and just how inspiring you are as always. Bless your heart my beloved one.

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on July 8, 2008 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

Hope I am not the one cited in your last few lines. But, this was great reading!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 8, 2008 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

The old adage of "set it free..." is so very true and you have captured with your usual elegance in this poem.  

posted by Troosha on July 8, 2008 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my dear fantabulous Marta, your Desert Prince will give you something in your honor tomorrow, for his inspiration. The wet ocean kissed sands needs a

posted by Bhaskar.ing on July 8, 2008 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Prego - moto bene

posted by Smittenheimer on July 8, 2008 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

..yes, the key is to go into the fear, the emotion, the feeling, find out its lesson for you, move through it...too many never embrace their darkness because of fear and thus never learn the secrets that it holds for you...then other get stuck in the darkness, the fear, the pain, the negative emotions, forget to move through to the light, love waiting on the other side...it's not an intellectual exercise...you have to DO it...moon

posted by magic_moon on July 8, 2008 at 6:55 AM | link to this | reply

posted by shamasehar on July 8, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful words .. arranged beautifully .. lift me up!

posted by Angesom_AG on July 8, 2008 at 4:36 AM | link to this | reply

Ah, I hope the friend has listened.  One of the hardest things to do is to let go of real emotions...well...not for some...there are those who let go TOO much, but I always feel it is worrisome when none is really shown.  This poem was beautifully written!!

posted by NiteTide on July 8, 2008 at 12:42 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poem my dear!! Thanks for your comment and for sharing and understanding my fantasy. Scuba diving ıs something I haven't trıed yet but, one day will. Take care of my Mıamı untıl I can come back. Wish I could tomorrow, but I have to leave every 90 days and that's a bıt tedıous.

posted by vogue on July 7, 2008 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

La dulce grande, mujer de mariposa!

Fantastic work, Sinome!

posted by _teddypoet_ on July 7, 2008 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

Simone, so tenderly and eloquently spoken...read aloud, the softness and yes, dulce - sweetness just flows ~ Elyse 

posted by elysianfields on July 7, 2008 at 10:50 PM | link to this | reply

WOW! what passion jumps at you from this..It has stirred something in me..may I use this as an inspiration for my pen?

posted by Wigopa_ on July 7, 2008 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on July 7, 2008 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply