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(sigh...) That's my nose against the pane, looking wistful--
just when I thought my wistful days were done. 

posted by Ciel on July 7, 2008 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

I love when this happens ....
Great work!


posted by VictoriaP on July 7, 2008 at 7:55 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my, this is good.. I can so relate to this one. ~Peace, OTA

posted by Blue_feathers on July 7, 2008 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

Aw, Naut, you spoil me!
 Someone else pointed out it is a bit Dorothy Parkerish...     also thought it was about my own cheery experience, but in fact, it was inspired by HollyBird's sweetly romantic series.  Hence, my nose against the pane. (sigh...)

posted by Ciel on July 7, 2008 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

FYS, I hope at least the T-shirt is an attractive color...

posted by Ciel on July 7, 2008 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

Ciel
This is masterfully done, culminating in that last laconic line, with its hint of surprise and irony...

posted by Nautikos on July 7, 2008 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

been there, done that, got the t-shirt.

posted by FineYoungSinger on July 7, 2008 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply