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Kabu

This is a novel.... I love it.

posted by Justi on July 7, 2008 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

still keeping us in suspense huh...

well its working... I'll be back

posted by RabbitFromtheWoods on July 7, 2008 at 11:34 AM | link to this | reply

Oooohhhh...you do like suspense don't you Grandmummy?  So do I!  Please keep it coming!

posted by lovelyladymonk on July 7, 2008 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

Nice job of building suspense, Kabu.

As Arnold says, I'll be back!  :)pat

posted by Pat_B on July 7, 2008 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply

...great writing...i stumbled upon a dead body once...suicide victim, although i didn't know if it was murder or suicide...there was some ludicrousness on my part involved in the situation. LOL Moon

posted by magic_moon on July 7, 2008 at 2:23 AM | link to this | reply

I'll be back to find out more....

I like that it's contemporary, and the detail like the lone voice who says the word that most think of saying

posted by Azur on July 7, 2008 at 1:53 AM | link to this | reply

kabu, This story is quite captivating.  You surely know how to write to make one want to read. 

posted by TAPS. on July 7, 2008 at 1:19 AM | link to this | reply

sweetheart keep 'em coming pleaseeee.....

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on July 6, 2008 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply

elyse says Encenada, but I say Ensenada..........wonder whose right?

I should Goggle it.

Just did, click here.....I love Lyle's music.

posted by benzinha on July 6, 2008 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Nooooo, don't ruin the lemon and brown linen pant suit. Nooooooooo

I wanted to borrow it.

posted by benzinha on July 6, 2008 at 10:28 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

I think that Mary is a buck and a half short with her comment about the lovely pant suit.I did like the Lyall Lovett music though, wish I'd been at that party. LOL Well done darlin'

posted by WileyJohn on July 6, 2008 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my Gawd is right!!!  This is chilling... so what happened after?

posted by Sinome on July 6, 2008 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

Okay Kabu ~ not only is this creative to the max...Encenada playing (I didn't know Lyle Lovett sang that...my memory is of Neil Diamond ---I'll have to get Lyle's rendition) and all of this is so interesting to follow, like scene after scene and chock-full of imagery...By jove, I think you've got a nail-biter here  (better than Agatha Christie) u so much and am so tickled to read this blog of yours, Elyse saying Gnite 'til later ~

posted by elysianfields on July 6, 2008 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

O....M.....G.....

posted by NiteTide on July 6, 2008 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply