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The only thing worse than lost love...
Is to never know love at all... You teach us each day by your very actions what love is... Thank you, bless you, bravo
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Smittenheimer
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July 7, 2008
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Your excellence is showing through!
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poetperson
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July 5, 2008
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This torn at my heart..WOW! Very nicely done!
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Wigopa_
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July 4, 2008
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awww this is sad; painfully sad because if there is 'love' it should never be denied. I guess. WOW...a passionate one here Jen ~ soulfully so. Write on!~ Elyse

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elysianfields
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July 4, 2008
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Resembles Romeo and Juliet!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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July 4, 2008
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I just had to read this again sweetie
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Kabu
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July 4, 2008
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Beautiful! you are so very talented and I will continue to enjoy and reading on...
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fairygoddess
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July 4, 2008
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Ah!
I could feel the love, it was so tangible...Lovely...I will not be leaving I was just taking time out to say thanks to wonderful persons like you...HAPPY 4th of July
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Color_Your_Life
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July 4, 2008
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Purple Mermaid,
ah ha my ma, hi ! ah ha my ma, hi ! Before commitments make sure you’re with the right friendly soul love! lol, BCA!
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July 4, 2008
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...what love is 'proper', 'natural', 'legitimate' has been interpreted differently by different cultures in different times...brother - sister marriages occurred for Egyptian pharaohs, first cousin marriages are legal some places, not in others, same with uncle - niece marriages. Love is what is important I think. Moon
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magic_moon
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July 4, 2008
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lovers should never be parted
posted by
lustorlove
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July 3, 2008
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Wonderful!
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
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July 3, 2008
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are they first cousins, if so they are not suppose to love in that way,
because same blood
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9STAR
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July 3, 2008
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This is so typically PurpleMermaidish. So touching, so philosophic, and real-life realities of love captured in its truism. Wonderful entry this, my
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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July 3, 2008
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It's touching indeed !

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posted by
afzal50
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July 3, 2008
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so beautiful almost as lovely as the love Wiley and Kabu share!!!!!!!!!!!!!

in their house of love.
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Kabu
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July 3, 2008
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....surreal indeed!! Beautifully made
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NiteTide
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July 3, 2008
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