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a good thought,
very well expressed! 
posted by
pelagus
on July 9, 2008 at 6:58 AM
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Do translate this and give it in youtr blog for the benefit of everyone.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 8, 2008 at 7:18 AM
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Absolutely remarkable, the way the pain of it all is brought in language so live; words, straight from the heart put on paper, can still be seen to be throbbing. Fantastic! Well done, dOlly
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 8, 2008 at 7:17 AM
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Bhaskar ji ,wrote this one last night and I am sharing it.
Lagta hai-
koi chot abhi lagi hai,
naya zakhm koi mila hai,
kalm ki dhar painee,
safhon se lahoo tapak raha hai,
aaj aankh nam nahin hai,
saihee sesak rahi hai,
lafz dil ban kar,
kagaz pe dhadak rahein hain.
posted by
shamasehar
on July 8, 2008 at 5:46 AM
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Thank you dOlls, the sher is for the shayar
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 7, 2008 at 7:11 AM
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Bhaskarji, I would like you to read my hindi poem "Zindagi Nama" since you have mentioned your love for shayari.Thanks, for sending that lovely sher.
posted by
shamasehar
on July 7, 2008 at 6:40 AM
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dOlly
Phool khiley shaakhon pe naye, aur dard purane yaad aaye. Tum yaad aaye aur tumhare saath zamnein yaad aaye, biend said for the blossoming
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 7, 2008 at 6:21 AM
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very true
posted by
Star5_
on July 5, 2008 at 10:04 AM
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