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Thanks for your comments, guys! You're very encouraging!

posted by Ariala on July 4, 2008 at 4:19 AM | link to this | reply

your poetry sure has magnetic impact my dear....

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on July 3, 2008 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Utterly divine, Ariala.  I am speechless.

posted by myrrhage on July 3, 2008 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

This is lovely, Ariala :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 3, 2008 at 5:36 PM | link to this | reply

See? I read poems. LOL

posted by shelly_b on July 3, 2008 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

Love this Ariala! We all need to have a Dream to cling on to! Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 3, 2008 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

Hugely profound! Nice work, Lady!

posted by teddypoet_ on July 3, 2008 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

Nite, thanks...was trying to choose my words carefully there!

posted by Ariala on July 3, 2008 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

Oooh, I must admit, the moment I got to these lines: "and the longing / has a vampire's grip" I was enthralled....the wording is "gripping" in itself.  Just wonderful!!

posted by NiteTide on July 3, 2008 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, kayzzaman!

posted by Ariala on July 3, 2008 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent piece from you, Ariala

posted by Kayzzaman on July 3, 2008 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS and monkie, thank you!

posted by Ariala on July 3, 2008 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala, that last section is so "right on".   Good work. 

posted by TAPS. on July 3, 2008 at 10:47 AM | link to this | reply

without the dream

 

posted by monkies_uncle on July 3, 2008 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply