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Sinome!!  I was wondering if I may use this poem as one of the examples on my "different forms of Poetry" post?  Pleeeeeease?? 

posted by NiteTide on July 4, 2008 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

...there is just no telling what kind of crazyness nite tide will inspire......

posted by magic_moon on July 2, 2008 at 3:09 AM | link to this | reply

wow......you both are amazing!!!!!!!

posted by 9STAR on July 2, 2008 at 1:59 AM | link to this | reply

and your inspiration didnt fail you my dear one..you sure came up with such an amazing work of art and a wonderful composition here! Bravo!!!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on July 1, 2008 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Not bad reading for an hourglass!  Unselfish action! Great!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 1, 2008 at 8:37 PM | link to this | reply

I like the shape of an hourglass, as time...I like this poem as well, of course...So touching!!! Tugs at my heart.  Such a precious pearl of a prayer.  ~ Sinome, write on!!!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 1, 2008 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

Well done, Sinome!

You pulled-it-off on the shape and wrote astounding verse at the same time.
The content didn't suffer at all.

posted by metalrat on July 1, 2008 at 3:47 PM | link to this | reply

OoooooOoooh, this was WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  You even got rhyming going on!! WOWOWWOWOWOWOWOWOW!  You rock, Sinome!!!!! You WAY rock! I mucho u!!!

posted by NiteTide on July 1, 2008 at 2:41 PM | link to this | reply

posted by lestate7 on July 1, 2008 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

He hears you, my friend...patience is sometimes so hard...

fantastic writing, Sinome...

posted by _teddypoet_ on July 1, 2008 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply