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An excellent plea for honesty of one's self! Grand effort! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 2, 2008 at 1:35 PM
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sad, deep and beautifully written
posted by
gold_dust
on July 2, 2008 at 6:21 AM
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It must be such a painful experience, dear, but your words are so strong.
posted by
vogue
on July 1, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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oh my dear, it must have so stressful...hope you're all better now my dear. Keep it puring in your writings dear...somehow it helps releasing the pain...it shall pass no matter what it is...it shall pass dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 1, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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wowowowow. This was mind-boggling...to say the least. The repeat in the poems just made the poem all the more powerful and you just blew my mind to kingdom come. Wow. That's all that's going through my mind: WOW.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 1, 2008 at 3:27 PM
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That was incredible
Very heartfelt. i really liked the way you kept reworking the main theme, it reminded me of a symphony.
posted by
Sudanym_
on July 1, 2008 at 2:36 PM
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Very deep, my friend...well-done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 1, 2008 at 12:21 PM
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Whoa Ty, take it easy, it's all a part of healing sweetie..great write!-Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 1, 2008 at 12:16 PM
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For this, you get an honest
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posted by
vogue
on July 1, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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