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The imagery is powerful ~ the voice is tender and touching, 'sad' ~~~ poignant Simone.
Elyse
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elysianfields
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July 1, 2008
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Man O man you can create outstanding imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
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June 30, 2008
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I meant "could"
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Troosha
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June 30, 2008
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I cold feel the sadness - the emptiness.....
posted by
Troosha
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June 30, 2008
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you say things in my language, but better
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lustorlove
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June 30, 2008
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So beautiful albeit so very sad..............
it's amazing how many times a heart can break and be made whole again; thank you my friend and God bless
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mariaki
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June 30, 2008
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Thankyou for posting this amazing poem...
...I was really moved by your work. I look forward to reading lots morein the future. Holly.x
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HollyBird
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June 30, 2008
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...so very sad...moon
posted by
magic_moon
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June 29, 2008
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Superbly crafted...a haunting narrative, my friend...
posted by
_teddypoet_
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June 29, 2008
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Poignant and so touching, but know that my dear Marta is a beautiful shimmering light.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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June 29, 2008
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wow
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9STAR
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June 29, 2008
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This kills my heart. It is so heart-breakingly sad. Reason for all the pain written on here, dearest?
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NiteTide
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June 29, 2008
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wow
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9STAR
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June 29, 2008
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