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Yes Troosha ~ a good choice.  It is so full and rich ~ leaves a good feeling.  ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 1, 2008 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha
You are a superb Troosh del-sarto who can weave magic into the fabric of life with astounding word imagery. 

posted by Bhaskar.ing on June 29, 2008 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha ~.~
The "book" -- DEFINITELY! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on June 29, 2008 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

...masterful lacing of word pictures redheaded lady...moon

posted by magic_moon on June 29, 2008 at 3:36 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Troosha
I liked this too, a good choice.. we are all weaving, we don't all realise it:)

posted by mneme on June 29, 2008 at 2:21 AM | link to this | reply

It would be a great addition to any book Troosha...its beautiful!!!!!

posted by Sinome on June 28, 2008 at 10:51 PM | link to this | reply

I liked this very much...I found the imagery and rhythm had great flow leaving us with a great feeling afterward...

posted by wigopa on June 28, 2008 at 10:48 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice imagery and colours
just like the fabric of life......

posted by Greenfields on June 28, 2008 at 7:55 PM | link to this | reply

The heart & brain that can conceive such unique ideas, words..
and put 'em in a poetic form is outa this world indeed..i bow to u ma'am Troosh!Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on June 28, 2008 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem and it goes perfectly with your image....

posted by Departed1 on June 28, 2008 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful sculpture and poem.

posted by Winged on June 28, 2008 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

So DoPE!!!!!!!!

posted by lestate7 on June 28, 2008 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

"human horoscope" - that really jumped out at me, b/c that's what we
really are (reminds me of how we're like books waiting to be read)...speaking of books, make sure to let us know when that book is ready......

posted by Rumored on June 28, 2008 at 11:02 AM | link to this | reply

The human cloth of story telling
woven together by words..... brilliant!

posted by Loribeth215 on June 28, 2008 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

This one definitely has my vote to make it into your book!  sam

posted by sam444 on June 28, 2008 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

That's intriguing...especially the last part of "human cloth" - wow.  You are such a wonderful and interesting writer that I just can't get enough of your poetry!! 

posted by NiteTide on June 28, 2008 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

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