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...i like it...here's the 'proof' that it is good...about 2/3 of the way down, i forgot that i was on blogit, forgot that i was reading to 'edit'...i was engrossed in your story...
...embarassing but, i would think that that is the affect that you are looking for. Moon
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magic_moon
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June 26, 2008
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Thanks, I agree with your observation, Hilow--will make the switch.
posted by
Ciel
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June 26, 2008
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I am currently using a Fuji Finepix S5700 digital with a range from super-macro to 10x optical zoom. I do minimal editing with Photoshop 7.0 and a few programs online.
Road trips across the US are still a passion, and when I fly, I am mighty put out if I can’t get a window seat, preferrably well-ahead of the wing.
I would reverse the order of the above paragraphs to flow as follows:
Road trips across the US are still a passion, and when I fly, I am mighty put out if I can’t get a window seat, preferrably well-ahead of the wing.
I am currently using a Fuji Finepix S5700 digital with a range from super-macro to 10x optical zoom. I do minimal editing with Photoshop 7.0 and a few programs online.
Other than that I think the approach you took is very personable. 
Good job!
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Hilow
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June 26, 2008
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