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I bet it would be nice down there, Vicki...

...I wouldn't mind visiting there myself.

posted by metalrat on July 8, 2008 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome job!

You know you are welcome anytime to visit my little newly discovered harbor!

posted by VictoriaP on July 7, 2008 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

I like this one very much!

posted by Ciel on July 7, 2008 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

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Elyse, coming from a real poet like you this is a huge compliment...

posted by Nautikos on July 6, 2008 at 4:06 AM | link to this | reply

I want you to know Naut that I have read this umpteen times ~ and each time...a different effect.  but all the effects of ~ sigh and rhythm and imagery and all, stunning ~ WRITE ON!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 4, 2008 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, OTA. That was the idea, of course...

posted by Nautikos on July 3, 2008 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply

Even you name, Naut , reminds me of the sea. Beautiful! ~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on July 2, 2008 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, Shelly! Don't know about 'multi-talented', I just try my hand at a little occasional poetry...

posted by Nautikos on June 26, 2008 at 5:21 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you very much, Sinome...

posted by Nautikos on June 26, 2008 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks TAPS! It's high praise indeed to be compared to John Masefield, who was also a real sailor, instead of just an amateur like myself...

posted by Nautikos on June 26, 2008 at 5:18 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Heart in rythm with...

Thanks, rhondanelle...though I really don't know much about Angels...

posted by Nautikos on June 26, 2008 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Naut! You are so multi-talented. I think you could write anything you wanted and at a high level!  Shelly

posted by sam444 on June 25, 2008 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful haiku Naut... I love the way it ties the beat of your heart to the mist of the morning and the echoing sounds of the boat... lovely.

posted by Sinome on June 25, 2008 at 11:51 AM | link to this | reply

Just as Lovely as this one....
            "I must go down to the seas again, to the lonely sea and the sky,
                and all I ask is a tall ship and a star to steer her by;
                    and the wheel's kick and the winds song and the white sail's shaking,
                        and a gray mist on the sea's face, and a gray dawn breaking....."

posted by TAPS. on June 25, 2008 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

Heart in rythm with...

Those you love

Angels you lost

The pounding of the Universal laws? Thank you

posted by poetperson on June 25, 2008 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply