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Probably we are all here on lease but I liked:
as Love draws near me Such a great line! sam
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sam444
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July 18, 2008
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Superb, my friend...excellent indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_
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June 25, 2008
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The entire poem felt incredibly warm and inviting and your final line just blew my thoughts out of the water. To know that something is only on lease and will have to be given back....makes things all the more precious and all the more important to us. It was a valuable line that brought the entire poem together and I thought it was an absolutely perfect ending to that kind of happiness. Thank you so much.
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NiteTide
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June 25, 2008
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What wonderful words Arial--especially the last two lines! I loved it.Chris
posted by
Scramble
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June 25, 2008
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Really a gifted one, Ariala
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Kayzzaman
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June 25, 2008
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