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Fantastic!

posted by teddypoet_ on June 25, 2008 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

Poetic adventure, Wow, this is so full of life, and a secret spilled out. Just love On My Wedding

Eve.


posted by yellowrose55 on June 25, 2008 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Set this to music and call Gordon Lightfoot! This is the stuff of folksong
Way to go, Kabu! 

posted by Pat_B on June 25, 2008 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

Where to start? I thought this was fabulous imagery. It cut deep and then it didn't cut so deep! Man alive I thought this was outstanding imagery! WoW!!! Shelly loves you so very much. Man this was good, and good again! Your sam I am

posted by sam444 on June 25, 2008 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
Pheww... now that was most certainly a gripping and compelling read.  If that doesn't invoke any number of emotions in anyone who might stop by for a read, I don't know what would???

posted by Troosha on June 25, 2008 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu
Wow! Wow! Lady you are full of talent, love, goodness and all that is positive. This is an awesome talent here. Love and best wishes to you and your man in all that you do.

posted by Justi on June 25, 2008 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

When the spirit moves you!
Great things happen, like this piece

posted by KaBooM62 on June 25, 2008 at 1:08 AM | link to this | reply

Amazing piece Kabu... you are so talented :-)

posted by Sinome on June 24, 2008 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply

LOL Yes darling I wrote this tonight. I do that sometimes.
I had nothing to write so I let this  use my fingers. That's the only way I can explain it.

posted by Kabu on June 24, 2008 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu ~ I read and re-read...This is so awesome!!!! Did you write this?  This is so powerful and so passionate and so ~ (doubletake, doubleread) WOW!~ I love you much ~ WRITE ON!!!!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 24, 2008 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Wiley I love you
 Sailing 

posted by Kabu on June 24, 2008 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuiepie-;)
Powerful, emotional, and superbly poetic love. I love the manner in which you portrayed the convict ship and how so many arrived in Australia, not knowing what their lives would be like,and starting new lives after being humiliated by the British. I really must study more of the history of Australia, Now, toss that captain overboard darlin'. Ship 





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