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i said your poem was incoherent but i was probably wrong 'cause i usually just don't get poetry. Besides everyone to disagree. So don't listen to me, you probably don't anyway, OK...
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froghead
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June 25, 2008
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Troosha~ am I understanding that you may have sold your house today?
~ WOW! This poem is absolutely divine. Why go on vacation when I can just read your peaceful, alluring poetry? ~
~ captivating and riveting. Elyse
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elysianfields
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June 25, 2008
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Troosh
This is very, very good! It's one of those poems that
forces you to enter it and dwell in it...
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Nautikos
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June 25, 2008
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I love the thought of sailing on our inner seas Troosha sweetie!
As I also loved the whole piece complemented once more so perfectly by the picture selection; thank you so much and God bless
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mariaki
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June 25, 2008
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This is so beautiful... The picture and the poem...
Now you're leaving me breathless!
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The_Lost_Dutchman
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June 25, 2008
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Troosha
Sailing in our "inner sea", kept coming back to mind again and again, and so I came in again for another read that took me to the realm of the sublime.
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Bhaskar.ing
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June 25, 2008
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Hi Troosha, I re-read your poem and your poem spoke to me differently the second time, so I thought I'd comment on it: I'm not sure if this is what you meant, but then again, poetry has hundreds of meanings I think - but when I read your poem again I was pleasantly lost in the garden of my soul. A place of beauty, peace, ugliness, and pain. I thought you words evoked beautiful images of calmness that lives in peace with our troubles, and for me, your poem spoke volumes that also eased some of my agitation. I think that is an amazing ability you have...to calm with your written words! You are so gifted, it just blows me away. W-O-W. I'm so glad I came back for a second read! ~
posted by
NiteTide
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June 24, 2008
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Green Day sucks!
posted by
froghead
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June 24, 2008
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You are like/not like Green Day to me. They write incoherent crap, but they are famous. You write incoherent poetry which is not crap (but i don't like it), because it contains beautiful imagery...so you are superior to Green Day like me, so you are like me...Get it? OK?
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froghead
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June 24, 2008
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1st-i don't usually like poetry but this sight has taught me to like it. 2nd-um, did i mention i don't like poetry? i don't like fiction either, although i (sometimes) LOVE IT IN TV OR MOVIES, which makes no sense to me. You didn't say anything that was "real" to me.
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froghead
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June 24, 2008
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...mostly captured by and lost in this imagery:
And the fevered pitch of self imposed boundaries
fall silenced upon nature’s splay
No sweeter a gift
as we stand in awe
and gently stroke the cheek of wonder
If only for a fleeting but caressed moment
we sail upon our inner sea
...sublime
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magic_moon
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June 24, 2008
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I'm with OTA!! That final line is FANTASTIC!!!!!!
posted by
NiteTide
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June 24, 2008
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"we sail upon our inner sea" 
~~~loved this Troosha~Peace, OTA
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OTA.
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June 24, 2008
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Most beautiful imagery and I am so happy for you!! sam
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sam444
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June 24, 2008
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Troosha, you have a way of taking people with you into your special places defined by words and you make them wish they didn't have to leave.
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TAPS.
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June 24, 2008
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Troosha
F A N T A S T I C !!!! xoxoxo, Blogit quuen of poetic imagination!
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Bhaskar.ing
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June 24, 2008
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This reminds me--
not just to meditate, but one of the ways of meditation that heals by leading us to and through our inner landscapes...
Are the photos you use, like this one, your own work, too? They are so often exquisite!
My daughter has been trying to sell a condo, and has just finally decided to rent it out for now, instead, as no buyers came in sight in the past several months.
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Ciel
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June 24, 2008
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