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tyleness
the change from
night to
moon in this piece is very powerful.
posted by
Hilow
on June 24, 2008 at 7:40 AM
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...been on blogit for awhile...don't really make the rounds...never read you - sorry...a friend said: "You should take a look at tyleness' latest poem." ...I'm glad she did...very good...very very good...very very very good...Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 23, 2008 at 9:20 PM
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How utterly POI-FECT! XOXO!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 23, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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I can totally identify with this poem tonight. Loved it, very intense and profound.
posted by
Sinome
on June 23, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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Ty, others don't hurt us..it is our reaction to others' words & deeds that.
hurts us..good write though! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 23, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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Profound indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on June 23, 2008 at 8:15 PM
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Your words ...
describes human nature anatomically, emotionally, and spiritually ... a most interesting piece, love.
posted by
BC-A
on June 23, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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