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Great and awsome read and write I love the walk on the beach the jump!

Can I share a post TEARS BLINDING MY SIGHT page 3 poem 2 i'll continue to read thank you.

posted by Mystereo on February 17, 2009 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

  What a wonderful poem. I love the image of your footsteps and beautiful realization, mate!

posted by BC-A on June 22, 2008 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thanks for the kind remarks.  I am glad you loved the poem. Sometimes you have to disturb a few grains (of sand). A straight and predictable path does not always lead to ones goal.

Thanks also for the link to poemhunter. I may still buy he book.  My wife thinks that I may have too many.  Can one really have too many books? 

posted by SFJoseph on June 22, 2008 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, I just love this one,  very poignant.  Loved the :great  disturbance in the sand" and you being pleased with the way you had changed it...like if you needed to be different... wonderful concept .  Beautiful work!!!. 

By the way, I read your comment at Bhashkaring's post on Browning... ( I am nosy that way ) I hope you do not mind my telling you this,  but it occurred to me that you could go to Poemhunter ( http://www.poemhunter.com/poems/ ) and you can read any poem from any poet there.  I don't know if you want to buy the book anyways but  that is an option and its free :-) .  Take care of you my feline friend  and say hi to your sweet daughter 

posted by Sinome on June 22, 2008 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply

Snookums and you went to the beach...WOW..Does mom know? Great as always dad!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 22, 2008 at 12:54 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting!!! as the path(s) are not always straight and in hindsight, we can see how we paced our steps ~ This is so rich ~ Your wisdom flows through your poetry!  ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 22, 2008 at 9:21 AM | link to this | reply