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Great and awsome read and write I love the walk on the beach the jump!
Can I share a post TEARS BLINDING MY SIGHT page 3 poem 2 i'll continue to read thank you.
posted by
Mystereo
on February 17, 2009 at 5:15 PM
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Excellent!
What a wonderful poem. I love the image of your footsteps and beautiful realization, mate!
posted by
BC-A
on June 22, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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Re: Sinome
Thanks for the kind remarks. I am glad you loved the poem. Sometimes you have to disturb a few grains (of sand). A straight and predictable path does not always lead to ones goal.
Thanks also for the link to poemhunter. I may still buy he book. My wife thinks that I may have too many. Can one really have too many books?
posted by
SFJoseph
on June 22, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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Wow, I just love this one, very poignant. Loved the :great disturbance in the sand" and you being pleased with the way you had changed it...like if you needed to be different... wonderful concept . Beautiful work!!!. 
By the way, I read your comment at Bhashkaring's post on Browning... ( I am nosy that way 
) I hope you do not mind my telling you this, but it occurred to me that you could go to Poemhunter ( http://www.poemhunter.com/poems/ ) and you can read any poem from any poet there. I don't know if you want to buy the book anyways but that is an option and its free :-) . Take care of you my feline friend and say hi to your sweet daughter
posted by
Sinome
on June 22, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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Snookums and you went to the beach...WOW..Does mom know? Great as always dad!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 22, 2008 at 12:54 PM
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Interesting!!! as the path(s) are not always straight and in hindsight, we can see how we paced our steps ~ This is so rich ~ Your wisdom flows through your poetry!
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 22, 2008 at 9:21 AM
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