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I thank you for the words of truth, that are truth! I am a man who just loved the best I can, 23 years till that day when she laid with another man! Clayton L. Ballast 6/21/08
posted by
kingclay
on June 21, 2008 at 4:30 PM
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I am sorry you are hurting so much. This is a beautiful poem, it shows you have great promise...and a broken heart. But broken hearts mend...believe it or not, with time. and promises are fulfilled, also in time. I know its hard to believe right now, but some day ...hopefully sooner than later, that hurt will go away and you will understand that it was a blessing that she left for you are better off without someone that did not appreciate you for the wonderful man that you are. And perhaps then, you will find your true soul mate, the one that has always been waiting for you. You will be OK my friend, and meanwhile, look at the wonderful poems your pain is producing. Right not you are a tortured poet. a talented one at that. Embrace your destiny and trust in your fate. It will be OK
posted by
Sinome
on June 20, 2008 at 9:58 PM
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