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sam444
A monumental work, sam. I am in awe.
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johnmacnab
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June 20, 2008
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Seems you've crossed some mighty bridges, and you've found serenity on the other side.
The strength in your writing brings me to tears.
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yellowrose55
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June 19, 2008
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perseverance
I think people write poems after they realize their struggle, yours show that you were aware of your struggle and stuck it out, which speaks highly of your character. and you express yourself so well! i beat around the bush, but you just nail it. much enjoyed.
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BigD81
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June 19, 2008
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Wow sam-what a fantastic journey you have been on! This writing is
Brilliant! God Bless. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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June 19, 2008
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oh elyse, one of my favorite songs by Stevie Nicks.... she said on an
unplugged special that she wrote it for her dad. Hey sammie, just taking lunch and reading again - hope your day is going well ... how is K don'? lol
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VictoriaP
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June 19, 2008
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amazing and intense!
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Ariala
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June 19, 2008
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posted by
contagion_publishing
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June 19, 2008
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I hope this works ~ (I'm not so sure of linking) ...but this is for you ~ Love you dearly Shelly, Elyse
(Landslide by Stevie Nicks)
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elysianfields
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June 19, 2008
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I re-read this again this morning ~ and each time I read, it reveals even more Shelly ~ I hum that song, Landslide --- Shelly, this is so rich, deep in soulful perspective and introspective value of gold just pours forth ~ I am drawn to this work, this Cantos. Just astounding.
~ Elyse loves you dearly, Shelly ~ Good day!
posted by
elysianfields
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June 19, 2008
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Great Poem !
posted by
afzal50
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June 19, 2008
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P.s sam check my new sh?t tell me what you think! love!
posted by
lestate7
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June 19, 2008
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Sam
Wow – this is such an outpouring of your journey, your inner struggles, and ultimately your capacity to choose (find) your way. Clearly it is a labour of love. It’s not easy to reach inside ourselves this deeply and put those introspections into poetry. I commend your perseverance and compliment the result.
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Troosha
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June 19, 2008
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I trust you are as proud of yourself as I am Shelly........
you should be; these are magnificent; thank you and God bless always
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mariaki
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June 19, 2008
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everyone are just so so proud of you...and so am I...it's been a great honor knowing you...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
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June 19, 2008
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thank you ! but boston was the better team ! they deserve it!
posted by
lestate7
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June 19, 2008
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poetry from the heart...eternal love...
posted by
_mai_
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June 19, 2008
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I stand in awe of your work...What heart and work ethic it takes to work so hard at something as grand (I am in awed silence) as this...Truly an Outstandingly Fabulous work! This is the reason you are number one...You are just amazing..Bravo!
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Wigopa_
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June 19, 2008
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Time indeed stood still as I was reading this poem, overjoyed, as also overawed, at the beauty, the pain, the pathos, the being of togetherness what was once physical, but not anymore, thus in in reminiscences now, and ultimately, the deep yearning to unite in the other world, freed of the mortal body and ever united in the union of the spirite to forever become one, for ever free. My vocabulary runs short of praising when I am overcome with joy.
Bhaskar tipping his heart in amazement, & singing all the way.
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Bhaskar.ing
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June 18, 2008
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