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i enjoy your choice of quotes
and I admire your use of imagery, i wish everyone explained things like you.

posted by BigD81 on June 20, 2008 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

What a, what a retweak it was for me Troosha. I loved it the more this time. Does that mean I have progressed? Here is a red for you to cherish.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on June 20, 2008 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for confirming I haven't lost it Troosha!
I thought for a moment I had a touch of deja vu! Just as beautiful as the first time round my friend; thank you and God bless

posted by mariaki on June 19, 2008 at 3:22 AM | link to this | reply

Take a bow and begın! That ıs sooo great!! I wıll bear that ın mınd. As for travellıng, ıt ıs a great pleasure to share waht you see and experıence wıth others and ın the process ıf you are very lucky ıncrease your readers ınsıghts and perceptıon. So, next tıme, get crackıng on that new laptop!!

posted by vogue on June 19, 2008 at 12:05 AM | link to this | reply

The "walls of Fantasy" are tall ones..Sometimes we need a little lift..Fabulous write!

posted by wigopa on June 18, 2008 at 11:51 PM | link to this | reply

Stunning...
...absolutely stunning!
I didn't see the previous draft, but, this is spectacular.

posted by metalrat on June 18, 2008 at 6:31 PM | link to this | reply

peering over walls of fantasies thats me

posted by lustorlove on June 18, 2008 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

I agree to seize the day or even the moment!   sam

posted by sam444 on June 18, 2008 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha
Absolutely one for the collection. It is not just good, it is great.

posted by Justi on June 18, 2008 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

Niiiiice!  Clapping Hands

posted by NiteTide on June 18, 2008 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

...yes...all the bells are ringing...excellent poem...moon

posted by magic_moon on June 18, 2008 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

Perfect!!~ Troosha the whole flow of this is great, the imagery is - the analogy is what can i add? Perfect!!! Inspiring ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 18, 2008 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply

A great poem, this is! (I like the picture too!)

posted by The_Lost_Dutchman on June 18, 2008 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha, a good choice for your collection..I remember it well...
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posted by Rumored on June 18, 2008 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

Another "keeper". I think that is a valuable question to ask oneself......Will what I do today brighten someone's life. I sure hope so.

posted by ZenMom on June 18, 2008 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

Facing ourselves in the raw. I love that line. So true.

Wonderful post.

posted by Winged on June 18, 2008 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

posted by contagion_publishing on June 18, 2008 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

Another wonderful piece of writing Troosha! Chris.

posted by Scramble on June 18, 2008 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha, This one did ring a bell.  Well done!

Thank you so much for the 14 list that you left at my blog. I liked your ideas!

~OTA

posted by OTA. on June 18, 2008 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

It's a great poem. So well written !

posted by afzal50 on June 18, 2008 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

I remember this one and enjoyed it a lot!

posted by Ariala on June 18, 2008 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

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