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Nice one there.
Lovely, I love this one.  I like the  part about being one... very suggestive.  But on the whole this is a beautiful poem.  Nice one there.  Sophie.

posted by safriyie on June 18, 2008 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

as one
I know the feeling. It made it all come back when I was in High school and rode all the time. Your writings make me feel young again. I love them.

posted by windyz on June 17, 2008 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

as one
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posted by windyz on June 17, 2008 at 4:11 PM | link to this | reply

RIDE ON!!!!!!!!!!

posted by 9STAR on June 16, 2008 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

Thumbs UpStar

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on June 16, 2008 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

cool ...
I feel the ride on the trail of your lines!

posted by BC-A on June 15, 2008 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful ~ lively --- I love this...the imagery --- the actual photo ~ stirs me!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 15, 2008 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

Great!
As free as your poetry!

posted by CRShelley on June 15, 2008 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

Tho ive never ridden, ive often wondered bout the special relationship between horse and rider--both as fact and allegory. Particualrly liked how you took this relationship making it simultaneous with a larger universe.

posted by jfm32 on June 15, 2008 at 4:29 PM | link to this | reply

So wild and free they are, free spirits. Such beautiful poetry.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 15, 2008 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

Well formed and well worded!  This is a stunning poem!

posted by NiteTide on June 15, 2008 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

Well done indeed. I loved the imagery! sam

posted by sam444 on June 15, 2008 at 3:20 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem RomaKay.  I loved it

posted by Sinome on June 15, 2008 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

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