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this was really good. I'm glad I got to see it.

posted by -blackcat on June 20, 2008 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha, the ending

But the world will always
woo his children back for yet another kiss .   .   .  

Supremely worderful tribute to make any Daddy proud.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on June 16, 2008 at 5:12 AM | link to this | reply

Of course I would post a poem to honour my father...!Many of us will...

Many of us will..... But few could have done it as beautiful as you did! Thanks!

posted by Oosthuizen on June 16, 2008 at 1:50 AM | link to this | reply

This is gorgeous~ a re-reader x 3 for me ~ This is amazing ~ Troosha ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 15, 2008 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha

I miss my Daddy....beautiful.

posted by Krisles on June 15, 2008 at 12:38 PM | link to this | reply

I never had a father, this was so delightful to read! sam

posted by sam444 on June 15, 2008 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

I'm speechless!

   

posted by metalrat on June 15, 2008 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely!

posted by Greenfields on June 15, 2008 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and moving, Troosha...

In fact, this is one of today's prompts--if you'd like to leave a link to it there. 

posted by Ciel on June 15, 2008 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

absolutely wonderful!!

posted by NiteTide on June 15, 2008 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

...such a poignant and touching tribute...peering inside sacred spaces...blessings...moon

posted by magic_moon on June 15, 2008 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply