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very hot indeed

posted by Lanetay on July 15, 2008 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

The recent fiction in the library contains graphic sex. Your poem uses the sensations well. The poem communicates as  a personal and realistic intimate experience. You set it to poetry very well. Excellent! 

posted by BC-A on June 14, 2008 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply