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And also the least we can do...
...is leave the world a better place than we found it in.
Powerful message, Jen.
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metalrat
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June 10, 2008
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S0 beautifully sad Jen... so heartbreaking... you shold be writing about happier things, letting your heart smile not cry... This is beautiful though, you have such a way with words...such a gift. Be well my friend, rest and smile
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Sinome
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June 10, 2008
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Very stirring and sad.
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yellowrose55
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June 10, 2008
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painful
and evocative. Excellent...
posted by
Loribeth215
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June 9, 2008
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My heart is breaking. The images you have evoked within your words is one of the saddest things this world fails to see.
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NiteTide
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June 9, 2008
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Defenseless children of God .. where do they run to ..
A million dollar question indeed !You are a great thinker .
posted by
afzal50
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June 9, 2008
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beautiful as you are!!!!!
posted by
9STAR
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June 9, 2008
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What a powerful voice you have in this..Wonderful work..Very well written..
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Wigopa_
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June 9, 2008
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