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Steamy cadence. This can be read fast or slow. However, I found myself in high gear and it was exhilarating! Well done indeed! sam
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sam444
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June 13, 2008
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Oh I could feel the movement in this poem of yours...excellent!!!~ Elyse
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elysianfields
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June 10, 2008
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What a marvelous 'picture in words'-Ariala! I Love a good storm But-where
you are-it must be pretty scarey and I don't think I would look at storms in the same light as I do now! Ours are so mild-compared to what someof you experience!Chris.
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Scramble
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June 9, 2008
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Ariala, Nice poem. Reminds me of what all has been buried
under the sedimentary layers thes past millenia. Pyramids, dinosaur bones, DDT.
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kingmi
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June 9, 2008
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You described what I watched twice in the last week around four a.m. ...
very cool stuff, Southern!
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teddypoet_
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June 9, 2008
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