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mneme
Thank you, young mneme; it even intrigues me.

posted by johnmacnab on June 15, 2008 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply

johmnacnab, intriguing... :)

posted by mneme on June 12, 2008 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply

Pat_B

I'm off to look for dolphin-shaped balloons, and inspiration. 

 

posted by johnmacnab on June 12, 2008 at 6:17 AM | link to this | reply

Sira890
Sigh!  OK, Sira, I'll start r-writing it - after I've cut the grass, fixed the back deck, cleaned the pool and, let me think....

posted by johnmacnab on June 12, 2008 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply

cake? balloons?
Is there anything but chocolate?  And in light of the story line, dolphin-shaped blue helium balloons. If you run out inspiration, you can sip a bit of helium from the balloon and amuse yourself by talking "chipmunk."

posted by Pat_B on June 10, 2008 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

Mac

I need to know what happens next. So you need to finish it. And if the plot evolves to the point that it demands a book instead of a short story, all the better!

Write, Mac!

posted by Sira890 on June 10, 2008 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Pat_B
Decisions, decisions, what kind of cake and what colour of balloons?

posted by johnmacnab on June 10, 2008 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

BC-A
I'll try, BC, I'll try.

posted by johnmacnab on June 10, 2008 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

Whacky
Would Bo read it, though, Whacky?   I'm not going to finish it if my second favourite dog won't read it.

posted by johnmacnab on June 10, 2008 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply

sam444
I am giving it serious consideration, sam.

posted by johnmacnab on June 10, 2008 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

Very interesting, but it's only the invitation to your party.
You know you've got much more to tell before your intrepid sailor triumphs over adversity or not. So blow up the balloons and bake the cake..

posted by Pat_B on June 10, 2008 at 5:22 AM | link to this | reply

keep writing ...
a fictional Survivor. I feel you, working on your scenic adventure.

posted by BC-A on June 10, 2008 at 5:02 AM | link to this | reply

Oh come on finish it!
A rose and a smile from me! =^. .^= Bo too!

posted by Whacky on June 9, 2008 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

I certainly hope you continue to develop this!  sam

posted by sam444 on June 9, 2008 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply