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Mysterious & Intriguing ... oh yeah
You've done a great job at creating a mood for me as a reader.  I think you should watch out for grammer, and believe me I struggle with this myself when I'm in a creative frame of mind.  I so enjoyed reading this and I am def. going to read on.

posted by BahamaDave on August 11, 2008 at 12:15 PM | link to this | reply

You have very skillfully intrigued the reader...
...into wanting more. Now, on to the next installment.

posted by metalrat on June 10, 2008 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

What a mysterious begining...

posted by Wigopa_ on June 9, 2008 at 11:30 PM | link to this | reply

Very interesting!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on June 9, 2008 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

I am playing catch up after having such a crazy weekend..I will finish this tomorrow night..Great begining so far though!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 8, 2008 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply

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