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Re: Uranus Flowery Beauty
Your comments were most appreciated. Sorry I took so long to respond. sam444

posted by Mind_Portal on August 20, 2008 at 6:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Uranus Flowery Beauty
Thank you so much. I am sorry I took so long with my reply. I am glad you enjoyed it. Nataluna.

posted by Mind_Portal on August 20, 2008 at 6:50 PM | link to this | reply

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I do thank you so much for your sincere and helpful comments. Sorry I took so long to respond. Humble thanks, Jfm32

posted by Mind_Portal on August 20, 2008 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Uranus Flowery Beauty

Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Your comments are really appreciated.

Humble Regards,

posted by Mind_Portal on June 11, 2008 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

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Wednesday, June 11, 2008

I really appreciate your comments, Nataluna. Thank you so much.

Best Regards

posted by Mind_Portal on June 11, 2008 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Uranus Flowery Beauty

Hi, Sam

I do appreciate your heartfelt review. There will be more to come.

Thanks for push and your encouragement.

Best Regards, Mind_Portal.

posted by Mind_Portal on June 11, 2008 at 1:55 PM | link to this | reply

I loved it. I want more!   sam

posted by sam444 on June 7, 2008 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poem. Liked travelling in two dimensions at once, and how wonderfully strange the commonplace can be. About the free form romp--might be extraordinary for you, but it is only what I would expect from a poet. Sometimes editing is not the deletion of words or line, but simply holding your tounge (which is also hard to do). For me, I like how the poem stands as itself without your giving me directions how to read it, or your theory of literature. I have found that when a poem speaks for itself, just write what you hear and keep your trap shut, while not revealing all your secrets--just a nuge and a little lol. Just a thought because I had nothing else to do today. Your gift seems to be an outer perception delivered thru an inner voice...works for me,

John

posted by jfm32 on June 7, 2008 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

Ohhh, I absolutely love it!  Bravo, Bravo!  I will be back to read your stuff!

posted by Nataluna on June 7, 2008 at 10:02 AM | link to this | reply