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hmm-i thought it was an awesome poem-and it really read and fowed so well-and kept you in thought the whole time-i like how you convey your thoughts into "metaphors"

what happened to your signature comments?? thanks for your earlier one

posted by bumpsinaroad on June 15, 2008 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

hahaha!!!!!!!
this is so demented but kinda like the concepy...mike

posted by meeks2 on June 11, 2008 at 3:34 PM | link to this | reply

"pretty" demented

posted by thecryptkeeper on June 6, 2008 at 2:35 PM | link to this | reply

Sometimes relish helps.

posted by Ariala on June 6, 2008 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

CR
This is pretty powerful or maybe revealing or maybe both.  Anyway, I think we all probably have a demon or two locked inside a tiny jar.  Good work!

posted by Troosha on June 6, 2008 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply

Praise God ~ seal that demon away ~ wow --- this is so powerful and wonderful CR ~  ~ Elyse (etched to memory)

posted by elysianfields on June 5, 2008 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply