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this is so peaceful.. like wind through chimes

~OTA
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OTA.
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June 18, 2008
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Very nice!!!!
Now you're makin' me jealous!
But, seriously, this is the kind of imagery that original Haiku was meant to convey, until I came along and did violence to the rules.
posted by
metalrat
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June 11, 2008
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Makes me think beautiful thoughts. Love it.
posted by
TAPS.
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June 3, 2008
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YES ~ this is stunning ~ in all realms ---

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~Elyse
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elysianfields
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June 2, 2008
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You have so much imagery, and so well conceived. It touched all my senses! Bravo!!! sam
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sam444
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June 2, 2008
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Naut
With or without the
honourable mention, I loved it! You're very good at these....
posted by
Troosha
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June 2, 2008
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It's great to see the community inspiring one another.
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jmh256
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June 2, 2008
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