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A truly stunning poem. I love the analogy!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 29, 2008 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

Ty
Sounds as though as you watched the moon become your sun...you reached a moment of clarity. 

posted by Troosha on May 29, 2008 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

And so it goes...very well-done!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on May 29, 2008 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

Oh..the swinging moods..they can getcha :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on May 29, 2008 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

tyleness ~.~
Very nice! I liked this.  --the synchronization of ttwo hearts...crucial.  Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on May 29, 2008 at 7:36 AM | link to this | reply