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you find life in your life ...
that gives life to your words with meaning!
posted by
BC-A
on May 24, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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Transition well described!
posted by
Straightforward
on May 24, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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Rexx ~.~
Nicely done! --good read. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 24, 2008 at 6:17 PM
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Like the whimsey of 1st 5 stanzas--drowning to dive/ god as attorney, and i felt the poem was finished with 5th stanza. Wish I were 25 again trying to figure out how less is more.
John
posted by
jfm32
on May 24, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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