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Really enjoying your writing :) I like the way your mind wanders! Especially liked the line about 'But it's a hell of a lot better than mugging myself in the alley of a dead end street'. Also liked moon's comment about sunshine people vs. 'dark' ones.. there's a side to me too that enjoys a good wallow in limbo.

posted by starr_childe on May 26, 2008 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

 Great! I like this a lot.  Raised Catholic --- seriously (once a pious) Catholic ~ Limbo yes, one of those places along with Purgatory that I often questioned in / of my faith.   My daughter was just here for the past week...and we discussed LIMBO and Purgatory.  Interesting ~ I like this writing ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 24, 2008 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

John,  I think this is very good, ... I loved it, very articulate and packed with truths.  I loved "Show me this vision of what never was and what can never be"   (Maybe because I am dealing with something like that in my mind now) .  But truly, I loved this poem. Take care...

posted by Sinome on May 23, 2008 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

jfm...i've spent so much time in limbo, it's not a second home to me, it's my primary residence....to those who have only spent a little time here....they don't know the place at all....they never took the time to get comfortable....kick back....take their shoes off.....the sunshine people run from limbo....but a moon who is DARK....well, he's at home in such a place.....wonderful, wonderful piece....if "wonderful" is a word that one may use in limbo....Moon

posted by magic_moon on May 23, 2008 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Very cool indeed...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on May 23, 2008 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply