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Wow, that was one productive trip :-) I loved all your poems, the two Haikus were great observations, in the first poem you captured the hectic travel mood, and the second poem, my favorite was poignant and revealing. I loved the contrasts between the powerful and the powerless. The image of the homeless carrying his bedroll was great and effective. All in all four gems my friend. Great job!
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between street dweller and high ups
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between street dweller and high ups
Poem depicted a very well contrast between street/park dweelers and up highs. End was an inviatation to high up come down and sleep with commmoners in park. Efforts areomis worth appreciation
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