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Amazing my dear Troosha
(No pun intended!) Nothing short of perfection; but what did I expect
Thank you my friend and God bless
posted by
mariaki
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May 22, 2008
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Very nice love the imagery and arrangement!
posted by
Inspired8
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May 22, 2008
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Troosha, Each line tanding out in beauty, the one that took my heart
We touch
the cheek of silent self with forgiving fingertips. A Fabulous xpression!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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May 21, 2008
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Beautiful! I was there in the maze, I think.
A rose
and a smile
from me! =^. .^= Bo too!
posted by
Whacky
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May 21, 2008
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awesome pic and poem!
posted by
NighthawkNY
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May 21, 2008
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...it's always quite interesting to me to see readers' reactions to what i write....i've long said....and i am by far not the first to say....if you just listen to people....they will tell you EVERYTHING.....about themselves.....all of their 'secrets', all of their dreams and desires, all of their fears and loathings.....just listen....and, if possible, watch....they will tell you about themselves........what i "meant" by whatever i wrote is often far afield from what a reader sees....but, when she/he comments, she/he is telling me about herself/himself....and my job then is to listen to what they want to tell me about themselves....so....here i am....the "commenter"....telling you about me....or i guess that is about "meself"....which is this....when i read this, i see spider woman....i am with spider woman....and she leads me along the threads of her web....the web which she has woven which is THE reality and which is the backdrop of reality and substance of what we call "reality".......it is the "realness" behind this "reality"......and i also know that it is only my own fear and my own limitations which confine me to the web.....because her web is spun UPON another reality....and that reality is more real than her reality....more real than her reality which is THE reality behind all of this illusion which we take as real....so, i can simply let go the web....if i choose....and freefall through reality after reality after reality....each one more "real" than the last....and that it is all infinite.....so......what do you know about me now....because i am certain that it is something of myself that i do not want to reveal....Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
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May 21, 2008
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high frequency
absolutely love this poem... the sacredness of the unknown, this piece reveals depth of the deepest nature. wow, am speechless. this is one of my favorites of yours.
posted by
bluebossa
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May 21, 2008
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Beautifully worded and a very touching write. From my
to your
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posted by
cmhnord
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May 21, 2008
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Excellent as usual, Troosha...
posted by
teddypoet_
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May 21, 2008
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cool picture! awesome poem!!
posted by
RomaKay
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May 21, 2008
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The orientation within speaks volumes. Excellent imagery from beginning to end. Thank you for you comment on my Triolet. I was a bit rough on the groom. sam
posted by
sam444
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May 21, 2008
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I felt as though I was standing still on a warm flower scented night watching a coming storm.
posted by
Kabu
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May 21, 2008
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Very wise, Troosh! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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May 21, 2008
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Very well done, Troosha
posted by
Kayzzaman
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May 21, 2008
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This one conjours up-so many various visions Troosha! Wonderful! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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May 21, 2008
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You've involved all our senses with these powerful words!
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Ariala
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May 21, 2008
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