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Justi, sometimes I wonder if some of our homeless people ended up that way because of disasters like the floods washing away or ruining people's homes and belongings.

posted by TAPS. on June 18, 2008 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS

Don't know how I missed this one. It is truly awesome! Very clever, well done and so compassionate as you are. God bless you, lady!

posted by Justi on June 18, 2008 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

This breaks my heart ~ very touching --- so passionate!!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 31, 2008 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This is a wonderfully moving piece, and true poetry as well!

What a nice comment, Ciel.  I appreciate that. 

posted by TAPS. on May 25, 2008 at 10:28 PM | link to this | reply

This is a wonderfully moving piece, and true poetry as well!

What I most appreciate about it is that your content is nowhere sacrificed to the demands of the form; likewise, the form is not fudged or shoved about, never has to give way to the content. 

I will have to look more deeply into this blog!

posted by Ciel on May 23, 2008 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much, jmh.  Its fun to try to do different things with writing.

posted by TAPS. on May 22, 2008 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

I love the form that you used here. As always, you are one of the most creative.

posted by jmh256 on May 22, 2008 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS

This is so touching. Thank you for sharing this.

posted by Justi on May 22, 2008 at 5:47 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant with excellent use of the alphabet!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 20, 2008 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for reading my stuff, Soul_Builder.  I always appreciate your input.

posted by TAPS. on May 20, 2008 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

A story, well-told. Invisible people are everywhere, seen only by those using different eyes!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on May 20, 2008 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply

You have a beautiful attitude, vickip. 

posted by TAPS. on May 20, 2008 at 12:35 AM | link to this | reply

So sad. Had I the money I would take them in and get them the

help they need, fist and foremost ... and then just love them back to health.  Beautiful.

posted by VictoriaP on May 20, 2008 at 12:34 AM | link to this | reply