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So glad I looked back to see what I might have missed! This is absolutely
Beautiful Ariala! Chris.
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Scramble
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May 21, 2008
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Ariala
Beautiful write......makes me long so for my place at the lake....and the mourning doves....I'm sure my bird bath needs filling......
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Krisles
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May 20, 2008
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yep, I liked the punchline too. Nice choice of words. Sounds like a beautiful morning to be sipping coffee on the porch. Very eye catching for me.
posted by
LostInLife
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May 20, 2008
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sam and elyse, your sweet comments always make my day! thank you!
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Ariala
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May 19, 2008
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I love the sound of the mourning dove ~ have a few that wake me, and keep me so peaceful in the night hours... This is stunning Ariala ~
Elyse
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elysianfields
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May 19, 2008
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The close with time the scavenger of man was stunning! Well done indeed. It was a great set up for a magnificent close! sam
posted by
sam444
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May 19, 2008
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Troosha and Kayzzaman, thank you!
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Ariala
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May 19, 2008
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Ariala
That the rub – time can be a “scavenger” yet it can be a blessing. Lovely morning (mourning) image you painted.
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Troosha
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May 19, 2008
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Lovely!
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Kayzzaman
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May 19, 2008
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