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This is absolutely Excellent Troosha! Chris.
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Scramble
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May 18, 2008
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Stunning set up for this poem with the eyes of a tight rope walker. Way to grab the reader! sam
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sam444
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May 18, 2008
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What do you see when you look past the obvoius?
Great poetry!
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Oosthuizen
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May 18, 2008
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Ahh you hear what is not being said....
Bo =^..^= sends you a rose
and a smile
(from me
too!)
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Whacky
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May 17, 2008
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Troosha this is magnificent. I loved the ending, so full of hope :-) You are truly a great poetess :-)
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Sinome
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May 17, 2008
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Troosha
Loved the way you pulled such positive love from negative vibes in the beginning. You are magic in writing luv
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WileyJohn
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May 17, 2008
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what beauty I just love the ending, so positive, such a lovely poet.
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Kabu
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May 17, 2008
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