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 ~ This is sad.  Well written... Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 15, 2008 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, well expressed.

posted by Kayzzaman on May 14, 2008 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice, well expressed.

posted by Kayzzaman on May 14, 2008 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

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yes, my world has so much of burden and more stress.....so I feel like some one broke me in to pieces.

posted by Star5_ on May 14, 2008 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

Super_sonic, I hope that is just an artistic poem and not really the way you feel today. 

posted by TAPS. on May 14, 2008 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

I can feel this instantly, Very Good!

posted by yellowrose55 on May 14, 2008 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply