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I've been through that war!
I loved the corporate ponds! Great job! So Vivid!
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CRShelley
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May 14, 2008
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a great piece of work ...
Ariala your poem gives all. The reader finds colors the elements and emotion, dancing throughout it straight down. It moves and moves me, love!
posted by
BC-A
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May 14, 2008
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Ariala.....
I loved this piece! Nothing like a good 'ole adventure to work. I esp. loved the "sudden rain that hit like a thousand soldiers." Magnifico!!
posted by
Lyrico
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May 14, 2008
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Elyse, I actually have the day off...wrote this one last year :-)
Thank you for enjoying my work!
posted by
Ariala
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May 14, 2008
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I can see the power of these storms...you amaze me with your lovely descriptions ~ yes...onto work in the storms here, but taking it a bit slower, watching the pelts and hail in between, increase to size of peas --- hmmm... be safe and write on~ xoxox Elyse
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elysianfields
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May 14, 2008
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