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Like your playfulness and sense of irony, though it was a little long for me, and after I got the sense of the set up, I found myself scrolling to the end to see where it was going--and I was wonderfully surprised with the double turnaround in 2 lines. No big deal; some like a movie while I look for the snapshot. I think something might be said about the delivery and its timing.
From one tongue-in-cheeker to another, really enjoyed being set up for for the internal combustion of a punch line.
John
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jfm32
on May 24, 2008 at 9:54 AM
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all said in such a way....
posted by
Star5_
on May 14, 2008 at 10:35 PM
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