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Its FRAHERS DAY Sunday in USA.Your PAPA lives on...in yr poem.Sue got U as
a friend and a caring heart by her side, like your Dad taught you. Alelujha. God bless You Kind Mermaid. Shalom...and I bring tropical flowers for U (Poinsettia's, that have a connection with Christ and Christmas, in Mexico. Google it & be AMAZEd! Love, DEO.
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ILLUMINATI8
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One thing that surprises about your poetry is that I'm always looking
for the end, and everytime I think I find it, there's more. And what
surpises me about that is nothing is ever enumerated or repeated, but
the furthering of images remain completley fresh. OK, so sometimes I
scroll down to get to the end. Doesn't mean I'm not amazed.
John
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__Purple_Mermaid11__
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This, my dear, is absolutely wonderful! THIS is a winner! The crazy thing here is that you were not trying to win anything. You really spoke from your heart. What a wonderful father you have desplayed here! Bravo Darling, Bravo!!!!!!!! 
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This is my paid respects to your father-----He gave you the best gift in the world that ever could be given----Love!
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Nataluna
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May 14, 2008
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Well done.
I like the bit where he hit the bike rider!
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Antipodean
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May 14, 2008
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Beautiful Celebration Always
Once again you remind me of a great classic. This time love I think of the fantastic Rogers and Hammerstein song from their really big Broadway hit musical of original songs "Carousel." Similarly, your song of Mermaid inspires and touches me. A deceased father comforts his loved one invisibly in spirit. In contrast, the narrator's the loved one that he left behind in yours. In this way you offer a different point of view. The reality base of your poem inspires more personally than even the lyrics of the late great Oscar Hammerstein. Finally, I feel sorry that a great working fisherman died at so young an age. He missed knowing his beautiful, talented, and charming daughter from her pre-teen to adult years. However I guess that the presence of God in heaven surpasses the relationships on earth. I understand that they become on the level of seeing loved ones again at a great feast
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BC-A
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May 14, 2008
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What a tribute! It made me cry, honestly. Thanks so much for your lovely comment on age. I am flattered and it just goes to show that age is nothing but the entry in your birth certificate. And who cares about paper!!
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vogue
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May 14, 2008
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Beautiful Tribute Jen
I love this:
I felt your love
breathing for me
And it taught me how
to be strong
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VictoriaP
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May 14, 2008
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That was beautiful! Sounds like my parents who taught all 5 of us kids to be so independent in our zest for life!!!!
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majesticvisions
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May 14, 2008
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Wonderful heartfelt tribute my dear Jen
he must be very proud of the beautiful soul he produced; take care my friend and God bless you and yours always
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mariaki
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May 14, 2008
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I Can Never Stop Missing you.....
This is awesome. A great tribute to your father.
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Kolekshuns
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May 13, 2008
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Great tribute to a loving father !
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afzal50
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May 13, 2008
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Dear Mermaid, what a beautiful tribute indeed. He must have been a wonderful man to have brought up such a sensitive, generous soul. I love you dearly Jen and hope you are talking care of yourself. Be well my friend (and just in case Big brother Blogit is watching let me add 15 letters: abcdefghijklmno....) All my love
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Sinome
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May 13, 2008
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PurpleMermaid 11
What a wonderful tribute to your dad luv, he had a marvelous daughter that truly loved him. You blessed him as he blessed you darlin'.
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WileyJohn
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May 13, 2008
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this is my favorite! you are wonderful poet!
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lestate7
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May 13, 2008
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Mermaid,
That is so sweet. You must re-post this when Father's Day comes around.
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Loribeth215
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May 13, 2008
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Beautiful..and very touching..If we all could have a father like that the world be such a better place..I believe you have done a wonderful tribute here...
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May 13, 2008
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Jen, God bless you and your loving daughter's heart here. Oh yes, He
must be smiling, tearfully so, from above. I am so touched by your
endearing, very very moving tribute, poetry here. I love you Dear Jen
Elyse
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May 13, 2008
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Mermaid, thanks for sharing this with us..I never had a chance to know
my dad because he passed away when I was only 4, but I enjoy reading about other bloggers good dads..
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Rumored
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May 13, 2008
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Wonderful, Heartfelt...excellent, J...
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May 13, 2008
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What a beautiful and moving poem. I can't imagine losing a father like
that. I'm sure that he would be proud of you and your writing.
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May 13, 2008
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__Purple_Mermaid11__
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May 13, 2008
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