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posted by NighthawkNY on May 7, 2008 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome! I will have to look more into this style..

posted by Wigopa_ on May 7, 2008 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by VictoriaP on May 7, 2008 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

!!!

posted by Sinome on May 7, 2008 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

...if we could but see clearly...instead of through our preconceptions and lenses.... moon

posted by magic_moon on May 7, 2008 at 3:13 PM | link to this | reply

Disease

Diseased lover

Fucked me knowingly

Pulled away, isolated, alone

vd

 ©

posted by Harvardgirl_global on May 7, 2008 at 1:20 PM | link to this | reply

very good work here!

posted by FineYoungSinger on May 7, 2008 at 8:35 AM | link to this | reply

Most excellent!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 7, 2008 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply

I am very much liking your Cinquain series.

posted by jmh256 on May 7, 2008 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

well crafted dear.......

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on May 7, 2008 at 5:37 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Kayzzaman on May 7, 2008 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply