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Yes there are many different types of people that are out there..It takes all kinds to make the world soo cool to live in..
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Wigopa_
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May 7, 2008
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So true Mermaid dear and its all the all the colors that make it beautiful. Great work!

posted by
Sinome
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May 7, 2008
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this is truely great work!
posted by
lestate7
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May 7, 2008
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Very nice indeed and very true.
The more I travel the more the world un-ravel and is shown to be a Kaleidoscope! Tschüs!
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auslander
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May 7, 2008
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The world is a stage and we whirl around until we are dizzy. Who gives us orientation? Wonderful post.
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vogue
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May 7, 2008
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Oh, the kaleidoscope lets you see the different hues!
posted by
Straightforward
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May 7, 2008
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What can I say, tremendous work!
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Kolekshuns
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May 7, 2008
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Nice!
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Kayzzaman
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May 7, 2008
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posted by
jmh256
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May 7, 2008
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Nothing is gained by looking away.........
God gave us eyes to see not to keep closed; very well done my friend; thank you and God bless
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mariaki
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May 7, 2008
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Well Crafted
As always I expected something profound, unique, genuine, and pure...Thank you for your honesty.
As many have commented, I am but many i'm afraid..."Look At All The Colors"...I guess you can say
posted by
jpart122500
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May 6, 2008
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i love it
posted by
9STAR
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May 6, 2008
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Perfect descriptions ~ again Dear Jen you touch my heart...with your sensitivity and Passion you have ~ Elyse


posted by
elysianfields
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May 6, 2008
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I agree don't look away. lovely darling
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Kabu
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May 6, 2008
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Hi Mermaid
as always, you give from the top of your game! Thanks for another good poem.
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Loribeth215
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May 6, 2008
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Lovely as always sweet Jen ... my favorite line ... and, as always ...
there is that one that stands out for me .... "
What is the beauty
of laughter…if no one knows of tears?"
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VictoriaP
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May 6, 2008
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Those anchored in the spirit never get confused by the material transmutations. No relativism can distort their perceptions. Numeric superiority is immaterial, quality counts!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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May 6, 2008
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There is ‘us’ in between…" -my favorite line! really great, evocative writing!
posted by
NighthawkNY
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May 6, 2008
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You Are My Favorite!!
posted by
CRShelley
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May 6, 2008
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Just grand my dear. Did you get my email. Love to you my dears: Shae and Stef! Grandma
posted by
sam444
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May 6, 2008
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purple
very pretty
posted by
lustorlove
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May 6, 2008
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I wish people understood your message !
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afzal50
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May 6, 2008
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