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Well-crafted, Old Dutchman. Like the stairstepping down for effect...
posted by
saul_relative
on May 6, 2008 at 7:00 AM
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Re: Wow! This one makes my day! And the suspense thing, mmm...
I'm a big Hitchcock fan!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 6, 2008 at 1:01 AM
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Re: That is exactly what I like to do... Thanx for the comment!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 6, 2008 at 12:59 AM
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Re: Intersting write...
Thank you for the comment... The Phantom, yesss! Finally, I made it to the Opera!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 6, 2008 at 12:59 AM
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Intersting write...
made me think back to the "Phantom of the Opera" that I watched while I was in San Francisco last year..Excellent write!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 5, 2008 at 11:09 PM
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This is fascinating!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 5, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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Thanks for your comment and yes, this peom of your is fascinating. You have a way to bring a mysterious situation to eerie life.
posted by
vogue
on May 5, 2008 at 3:55 PM
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I have to agree with the general consensus... This poem is very cool and mysterious. I love your style, the drawing with the words, the suspense, it is unique and charming. Very good job!
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 2:53 PM
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cool title, cool poem...thanks for the visit earlier!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 5, 2008 at 2:07 PM
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Dutchman
You write some very cool poems! Intriguing, to say the least...
posted by
Troosha
on May 5, 2008 at 10:36 AM
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Beautiful write, keep sharing. From my
to your
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posted by
cmhnord
on May 5, 2008 at 9:23 AM
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