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I am soo going to try this thank you!

posted by Wigopa_ on May 9, 2008 at 12:45 AM | link to this | reply

Your writing is like a breath of fresh air Mother's Day Vase 





posted by cornstalker on May 7, 2008 at 12:35 PM | link to this | reply

I learned something new, thank you!

posted by callista22001 on May 5, 2008 at 11:14 PM | link to this | reply

I like the Cinquain form...yes I have written many of these...You do well with this form ~ touching, this one of your son ~ aww Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 5, 2008 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

interesting concept my dear....good work!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on May 5, 2008 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful piece. Excellent coordination!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on May 5, 2008 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

awesome! can't wait to try one o' these suckers!! keep rockin'!

posted by NighthawkNY on May 5, 2008 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

how kewl!

posted by LadyCeeMarie on May 5, 2008 at 11:48 AM | link to this | reply

Nice work!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 5, 2008 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

Kinda sad...
Almost sounds like an epitaph.

posted by Rainbow_Writer on May 5, 2008 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: cm
YES Troosha, very good. Post this.

posted by cmhnord on May 5, 2008 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply

cm
What fun...  Did I get it right? 

Katelyn
Emerging soul
Wining inner battles
Radiance, solace, victorious glee
Woman

posted by Troosha on May 5, 2008 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

Another form of poetry to try out. Thanks for that. I saw from a comment of yours that you also write on thisisby.us. Any good?

posted by vogue on May 5, 2008 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting form :-)  Nice poem :-)

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply

always wonderful to re-learn forms of poetry, forms of love&celebration. To

Jacob!

Shalom Cindy

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on May 5, 2008 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply