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Loved this one very much! The ambiguity...
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 5, 2008 at 11:48 AM
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This touched my heart ~
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 4, 2008 at 7:40 PM
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Lovely.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 4, 2008 at 7:10 PM
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a beautiful breath ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on May 4, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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Thank you all for the wonderful comments!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 4, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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Lovely promise...
...to have been broken, if that is what you're referring to. A short poem packed with imagery and meaning. Well done.
posted by
metalrat
on May 4, 2008 at 3:57 PM
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Oh this is just Lovely! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 4, 2008 at 1:50 PM
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Yep! This caught my attention!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 4, 2008 at 12:10 PM
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very nice
posted by
Lanetay
on May 4, 2008 at 11:30 AM
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Night
This is
great!
posted by
Troosha
on May 4, 2008 at 11:14 AM
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Wow! love this..I can feel the passion role out from it..
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 4, 2008 at 11:05 AM
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Nice!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 4, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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Nighthawk ~.~
Wow! This is really a very passionate piece (if passion can be subtle). Very nicely done! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 4, 2008 at 10:09 AM
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